Input needed for my film Music Videos That Still Want......

I would like some input on this clip from my film Music Video That Want Your Soul. As you might know, music videos have become pornographic. This clip, I added a cartoon effect. I gave my film out to one person to sample and he said it was too much and maybe blur it.

My goal was to show the music video industry for how it is. This is one of the few clips that shows how music videos are blurring the lines. My film doesn't show the worst of the worst and doesn't contain nudity, although this is kinda of close. I could have shown a Rihanna music video or a Beyonce video to showcase how even the major stars are doing that. Also, my movie has some intense violence in it for a brief part. One clip involves a music video with some children murdering some people (fictional). I might regret putting that in there I don't know, but maybe something will click in people. Maybe they will realize that violence in movies and music videos aren't cool or worth watching. It's just hard to expose music videos unless I show them for what they are.

Please leave your comments so I know if this clip is ok for viewing audience. If I upload this to youtube, I would make it so you would have to sign in to watch it and be over 18 for watching my film. Still, I run the risk of someone uploading it on youtube and not having this precaution. I just don't want children or young teenagers viewing my film.