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GMO speech (help would be usefull)
06-10-2014, 09:24 PM, (This post was last modified: 06-10-2014, 09:29 PM by RaFTertheONE.)
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RE: GMO speech (help would be usefull)
(06-10-2014, 09:19 PM)R.R Wrote: Read your speech.

Orwell wasn't American and you should use the word 'relevant' instead of 'relative' in the conclusion.

I was just about to say that it was a rough draft and I fixed that glarring mistake. I knew he wasn't American but at the time it got added and was never fixed. sorry

Thanks for pointing it out and thanks for reading it. And thanks for the relevant part because have missed that part.

Maybe I should use were here instead of was here?
What did you think about the powerpoint?
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06-10-2014, 09:37 PM,
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RE: GMO speech (help would be usefull)
'Were here' would be better.

Powerpoint looks good.
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06-11-2014, 06:02 PM,
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RE: GMO speech (help would be usefull)
(06-10-2014, 09:37 PM)R.R Wrote: 'Were here' would be better.

Powerpoint looks good.

I'm just worried that the teacher isn't going to like the last slide with the War is Peace with Barack Obama's Picture. Whatever I guess, it's my last speech, I'll pass. Then only one more class to go! A history class. I wonder what history I'll have to relearn?
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06-12-2014, 12:45 AM, (This post was last modified: 06-12-2014, 12:46 AM by Watchdog.)
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RE: GMO speech (help would be usefull)
Well... Who care what she thinks. If you believe that Obama is the head of a totalitarian Orwellian-like regime then stand by your convictions. Show the picture to prove you understood Orwell's warning.

Or you could prostitute yourself for a grad and become the slave prole that bows down to the system, thus starting a habit that may stick to you as you move on throughout your life...

hehehe
Paix, Amour et Lumiere
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