Poetry - Rhymes - Lyrics

[Shinobi]

A section on the part of the forum where some of us can express our inner selves
with poetry - rhymes - lyrics - or even so songs we have written to do with our world
and our lives its current state or even so the way we feel about whats going on
this can be political, scientifical, religious, current world agendas expressed through
the art of poetry - rhymes - lyrics.. please make suggestions anyone as to where this should be
and what part of the forum it should sit comfortably in. Many thanks!

[Cycle of Eternity]

im definitely for this. i have lots of stuff i have written and wouldn't mind posting them (instead a blog or something like that, that no one hardly checks).

maybe an all around artistic expression forum for artists of all sorts.

btw, great quote MaDiZmS. A Day To God Is 1,000 Years is one of my favorite songs ever.

[standvast]

A'ight ,nice incentive, :cool:

here's some random lyrics of mine,
Usually i write in Dutch , but i used to write English lyrics aswell.
This ain't stuff for songs, but i write back and forth with some
friends on a dutch forum.

rock hard boxed in lard on an oxencart !!/
which hardy sparring-gaurded tarbaby wants to barter? /
maybe i'll trade you a star grade martyrbrigade /
for a hovel full of shovels which are arguably spades /
ardent harkening? wait,..i got more marketing traits /
a mess of pressing questions, beckoning the sparkened debate /

No failsafe, no amends /
we strafingly descend /
slithering through shapes and bends /
in labyrinthian a-maze-ment /
tumbling down tunnelsystems hunting after vision /
humbly drum my runningrhythm , mumbling reminiscent; /
"falling follying fool short of a guise "/
"all is veiled by the wool over ones eyes". /
The unfettered heart holds no art to merit /
let it tare apart and then discard your cards of credit /
replacing 'em by decks of only upsidedown hung men /
tracing the effect of my coupled brown lungvents /
scoffing and diffusing philosophical musings /
no obvious conclusions or topical perusing /
just opaque translucence and optical illusions /
re-emerge like Koptic Christ to topple institutions./

Their shutters hung, they strung stutters /
since the muttering begun /
utterings of utter dung /
busting nut butter on their mother-tongue-
in cheek ,sons catch a sunstreak /as i come wit' tons of punspeak ,
native creative shape shift , though my name ain't Runnin' Creek /

Soberly boom bap, no overly groomed rap /
tap n clap , to the urgent sound of yappin' chaps /
undriven crap ?/ twist back my cap , givin' 'em dap /
flooring 'em 'n' pouring detergent down their traps /

bi-polar disorderly since my mood went south /
shoot yourself in the face while your foot's in mouth /.

throw up ya hands , like tens of leppers panicking /
Mc's got no stance, so they prance like prepped mannequins /
they question why I quest and try adapt to the shenanigans /
One-Eye holds 'em mesmerized, like captain Zap Brannigan /

Need i shine ? the spittle's lit /
heed the signs , ya little shitz /
leads of lines that riddle kids /
feed minds of symbol-literates /
my heartship's over middles ; split /
ya'll part lips , if the fiddle fits /

Guppy's caught ? get hurled in stacks /
like water off my burly back /
hide in reed when nerds attack /
while feeding 'em disturbing facts /
see how the infertile's axed? /
nipped in the bud like herbal tax /
hare's clipped and cut some verbs to tracks /
your whip's in need of turtle wax /

The hay on my fork made me pray for a tractor/
can't seem to set it straight like b-grade gay actors /
bucklin' under dead weight i play the chiropractor /
no active greymatter, payed slackers and lay malefactors /
HipHop's in a trash compacter , and i ain't to say who wacked her /

For kicks, who'll try snare the hare with the hi hat?/
singed? i tares off wings like Thai's dine on fried bat/
sly shy cats, eshewed to chew up whut i spat /
glad to son they "self" as they defy and belie dad /
Mum's the word,'n' i'm ghost like one third of the triad /<!--fontc--><!--/fontc-->

peace'

[Cycle of Eternity]

i'll share one too...

The Leo, heart of a lion, I'm enlightened, you can tell by my mane of flames
I'm firin', scorchin', creamate the torch, incinerate the brethren oath
In my chamber of darkness and light, It's neither I fight when I ignite
It's true, nice guys finish last, save my strength, and when I cross that line...
I'm kickin everyone's ass, so how nice is that? no ego attached, it's all me
The Cycle of Eternity, you can't see me even if you took a peek through infinity
Abolish the unholy trinity with my 360 degree math of Archimedes
I acknolwedge the source with the force of a zodiac course
You fall short when you reach for the stars with that mentality
I'm in the far, a different galaxy, creating new maps where all inhabitants be
King of the jungle, whether concrete or celestially
My conscious is all natural, your minds fake, indoctrinated feeble fables...
With the mind-state of Miss Cleo, you're futile
Subdue artificial rules and cause, I follow and create universal laws
C.O.E. without a pause or stop, just a lone man, I'm everything in one moment!
My existence is eternal!
While you place your soul close to lifestyles that are mere mortal

[Shinobi]

Quote:im definitely for this. i have lots of stuff i have written and wouldn't mind posting them (instead a blog or something like that, that no one hardly checks).

maybe an all around artistic expression forum for artists of all sorts.

btw, great quote MaDiZmS. A Day To God Is 1,000 Years is one of my favorite songs ever.

Yes! some serious feeling and lyrics well expressed
The formula for the cure album, one of the best because its so frikkin deep!
nice one Intellekt:)

Woah Standvast thats all mind blowing man!
also wether you usually write in dutch or not
you should be able to combine both dutch and english, the two in lyrics
it gives an excellent potion to rhymes, an exclusive formula
I sware I have seen you around somewhere on myspace Standy
i dont have a space of my own but I have the friends that do have a space
and im quite sure you are on some of their lists
I say that because I remember from the picture you posted in the conspiracy girls calender thread

Holy UFO's Intellekt haha! Thats fucking good shit man

Woaah, this idea-section- has to be considered ?
It's known by people that the finest form of expression
can come from the lyrics-poetry-rhymes one writes
infact theres some that are better understood through this in life
that for sure is known ..thanks guys! Im feeling your lyrics:)

[standvast]

Quote:I sware I have seen you around somewhere on myspace Standy
i dont have a space of my own but I have the friends that do have a space
and im quite sure you are on some of their lists
I say that because I remember from the picture you posted in the conspiracy girls calender thread

nah bro' that would be impossible, i don't do myspace at all.
but thanks for your words. :cool:

About the idea, i don't know if it couldn't just be a thread instead of a subsection, or
more than one thread, but then; under what header to put them &gt;?
It's been proposed before, well, not it these terms , but i think ;lyrics/poetry can
coincide fine with personal philosophy/art/etc , so i think we need to seal this with the other mods,
or hear objections / alternatives. As for me ; all for it.

[Shinobi]

Quote:

Quote:I sware I have seen you around somewhere on myspace Standy
i dont have a space of my own but I have the friends that do have a space
and im quite sure you are on some of their lists
I say that because I remember from the picture you posted in the conspiracy girls calender thread

nah bro' that would be impossible, i don't do myspace at all.
but thanks for your words. :cool:

About the idea, i don't know if it couldn't just be a thread instead of a subsection, or
more than one thread, but then; under what header to put them &gt;?
It's been proposed before, well, not it these terms , but i think ;lyrics/poetry can
coincide fine with personal philosophy/art/etc , so i think we need to seal this with the other mods,
or hear objections / alternatives. As for me ; all for it.

Well you have a double out there bro, but dont we all ? lol

I wanted to mention philosphy before but I just didnt lol I dunno why
but some people dont take it serious and often are quick enough to downplay it.
Yeah its nice enough being a thread, though as you say where would we place that
could well be a sticky in offtopic ? or another part of the forum as a stickied post.
perhaps titled " Poetry, Philosophical, Rhymes & Lyrics from the conscious self!
ok maybe not titled like that- I will leave that to a mod to decide whats best
but we definately have an understanding of this here and want it to be!
Thanks standvast. :smile:

[standvast]

bumpitty bump,

requesting mod imput whether this could become a section

- personal philosophy , poetry and penmanship -

Or as Madz put it;

Quote:A section on the part of the forum where some of us can express our inner selves
with poetry - rhymes - lyrics - or even so songs we have written to do with our world
and our lives its current state or even so the way we feel about whats going on
this can be political, scientifical, religious, current world agendas expressed through
the art of poetry - rhymes - lyrics.. please make suggestions anyone as to where this should be
and what part of the forum it should sit comfortably in. Many thanks!

thanks!

[Guest]

Isn't that what the blogs are for?....creative space?

[standvast]

Quote:Isn't that what the blogs are for?....creative space?

good point Mike, it is only that i've never considered starting
a blog that i overlooked it as an option.

[Ognir]

A thread or two sounds fine to me or blog it even better